Basic Template for the TOEFL ESSAY

Follow this template to make sure you have a clear structure for your essay.

Make sure you understand the question. Read it twice and ONLY answer the question.
Identify the type of structure of the question. Comparison, cause and effect etc. Chapter 9
Start with a mindmap. Maximum five minutes.
http://www.jcu.edu.au/studying/services/studyskills/mindmap/index.html

From your mindmap identify your thesis statement.
From your mindmap identify your topic sentences. I recommend three points forming the basis of three paragraphs.
Write your Introduction

•	Short background statement about your topic. 101 One sentence is enough sometimes.
•	You can say that both sides have good points but it is more precise, easier to write, and saves time if you choose only one side in a question.
•	Write a clear THESIS statement containing about three arguments. 103

Body

First paragraph
•	Topic Sentence of your first point  20-21,64
•	Prove it with Evidence, Argument or Examples

Second paragraph
•	Topic Sentence of your second point
•	Prove it with Evidence, Argument or Examples

Third paragraph
•	Topic Sentence of your third point
•	Prove it with Evidence, Argument or Examples

Conclusion

•	Summarize the main points but do not use the same sentence as your THESIS statement. 107

•	Add a final comment, question or thought that does not add any new argument.

The page numbers refer to Writing Academic English by Oshima and Hogue.